Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Hip hop is a culture of art and musical abillites and expressions. its orignallity from Africa and was born in the 1970s, in a urban community called the Bronx in new york. It consist of four major topics djing graffatti breaking and mcing. Turables mixing boards and computers are just some of the technology used in hip hop culture today without these djs arists producers and engineers would not be able to work they way they do playing mixing and producing music. Also they would not be able to connect to there audience.
Hip Hop which is a form of musical expression was born in the 1970’s in an urban community called South Bronx of New York City.  Hip Hop consists of four major elements Mcing, Djing, Breaking, and Graffti. Mcing is also known as rapping is spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics. Djing is when a Dj uses two albums creating tricks and scratches on a turntable. Breaking or also known as break dancing is a style of dance. Graffiti is an expression made by artist using pictures. Since the birth of Hip Hop it has emerged from the small community of the South Bronx to become a worldwide culture. All over America the hip hop culture is being embraced by all races and communities. This culture is one of the main cultures in the entertainment industry today. Also it is one of the most controversial cultures in the entertainment industry today. The Hip Hop culture is also connected to the fashion and movie industry. It has created many entertainment moguls and entrepreneurs.
Back in the 1970’s when hip hop was born in Bronx new york the tehnology being used in the hip hop culture was slow past. disk records turntables and atrax is what artist and djs used to put out their music and promote themselves/  Most of the People in the hip hop culture communicated by using the radios listing to listen to there favorite artists. Now in the hip hop culture today technology has changed in a huge way. There are some many differner forms of technology being used to communcaite. Computer the internet blogs social networking sites are all being used. This technology has made it faster to communicate also it has elevated the growth of hip hop culture and the audience it has.   hfggf

Sunday, June 26, 2011

Home Work ?s

1.What is the issue "so what? who cares?"
This isssue is technology and how people say it is destroying the new generation today.
2.Who are you as an author? ethos
I am a artist in the hip hop culture who understands the culture and can speak for it. 
3.Who is my audience? inside outside informed UN informed
My audience is the uniformed people in the world and the outside people.
4.Do research.

weekly writing

This week has been a good and productive week. School wise i am very confident with my courses. i have a strong topic on my culture and technology essay. Hip Hop is a world wide culture that i am a part of. Most people think Hip Hop is just rap music but its bigger than that. This is my first time writing an cultural essay so hope to do good. in my personal life i have also had a productive week. I started my new job and also had an interview for second one. i plan to just stay focus and keep moving forward with my goals in school and my personal life.

Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Hip Hop Culture and Technology


Hip Hop which is a form of musical expression was born in the 1970’s in an urban community called South Bronx of New York City.  Hip Hop consists of four major elements Mcing, Djing, Breaking, and Graffti. Mcing is also known as rapping is spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics. Djing is when a Dj uses two albums creating tricks and scratches on a turntable. Breaking or also known as break dancing is a style of dance. Graffiti is an expression made by artist using pictures. Since the birth of Hip Hop it has emerged from the small community of the South Bronx to become a worldwide culture. All over America the hip hop culture is being embraced by all races and communities. This culture is one of the main cultures in the entertainment industry today. Also it is one of the most controversial cultures in the entertainment industry today. The Hip Hop culture is also connected to the fashion and movie industry. It has created many entertainment moguls and entrepreneurs.
Technology has had a big impact on Hip Hop culture. Today technology is being used in many ways to communicate with in the hip hop culture.  The internet has change the way Hip Hop culture is being shown world wide. Sites like Twitter, Face Book, YouTube, and Blogs all contribute to how the Hip Hop communicates. With these sites and blogs people with in the culture are able to display there talents and abilities to the world easier.  

Sunday, June 19, 2011

weekly writing

When I first got the essay for are rhetorical analysis I admit I was a little shaky about doing it. This was my first time Writting one and I had no clue on how to do it. But after Mr.Paszek explained it to us in class I was very confident that I could write one. After picking the movie training day and waiting to the last couple days to do it, I half to say I'm very proud of my first paper for the class I think I did well and can not wait to see my grade. All my life I have not been to good at writing papers but I think I did good with this one I put good thought and work in to it.

Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Rhetorical Analysis FINAL DRAFT

“Do you want to go to jail, or do you want to go home?”(Training Day). Can you imagine being asked this question? It is rather obvious what the answer should be: You want to go home.  Well, this is just one of the memorable quotes from the academy award winning movie Training Day, written by David Ayer and directed by Antoine Fuqua. Training Day is about a veteran police officer (Alonzo) who is training a rookie police officer (Jake). Jake accompanies Alonzo on a twenty-four-hour tour of duty, patrolling the tough streets of Los Angeles. Alonzo tries showing him tactics and strategies to become a good narcotics officer.  The director Fuqua attempts to show the most authentic environment possible by filming on the streets of the Los Angeles gangs. Fuqua informs his audience about the journeys of narcotics officers through gang-infested neighborhoods by using realistic portrays of characters, actual gang members, and their environment.
In Training Day, the rookie officer, Jake, does not know what the veteran officer, Alonzo, has in store for him during his twenty-four-hour-training period. For the twenty-four-hour duration, Alonzo tries to teach Jake the strategies of being a narcotics officer (nark). This is so that Jake can eventually become a nark and join the narcotics team. Jake is willing to learn but realizes Alonzo’s tactics and strategies are different from what he thought. Jake wants to protect and serve, locking up the criminals, but Alonzo wants to be a crooked officer. Alonzo puts Jake in numerous situations where he has to think under pressure. He convinces Jake to do drugs while on the job. After Jake is under the influence from the drugs he sees a teenage girl getting raped in alley. He jumps out the car and saves her, beating up the two men. Jake wants to arrest the two men but Alonzo just beats them up some more and lets them go. Jake is upset with Alonzo for letting them go but Alonzo insist on Jake to calm down. Stating the teenage girl cousins who are Los Angeles gang members will deal with the men.  Also, he takes Jake on a raid with three other narks during his training session. During this raid Alonzo kills a drug dealer/ex officer on purpose and makes it look like Jake killed him after the dealer shot one of the other narks entering the house during the raid. But really Alonzo purpose of raiding the house is he just wants to steal the four million dollars the dealer has in his kitchen floor. To pay back a debt Alonzo owes to the Russia Mob. If Alonzo does not pay this debt back the Russia Mob will kill him. The narcotics team and Alonzo seize the couple million dollars from the known drug dealers ‘property, but when Alonzo offers Jake to take a cut of the money, Jake is confused and says no. After realizing how Alonzo’s narcotics team is being run, Jake wants out. “This is not what I signed up for,” he states in Ayer’s Training Day. But by this time, it is too late. Alonzo has left him in a Los Angeles gang member’s house where the gang members are told to kill him. Jake, eventually, escapes after he convinces the Los Angeles gang members to let him go for saving their little cousin early in the movie.  Jake still wants to do the right thing, so he goes and finds Alonzo and takes back the money he stole early in a police raid that Alonzo is going to use to pay off the Russian mob. If Alonzo doesn’t pay off the debt, he will be killed. Jake still takes the money anyway and turns it in to the police as evidence. Alonzo gets killed later that night, Jake has no sympathy for him. He feels the Los Angeles Police Department and the streets of Los Angeles will be a better place without him.
 Ayer used many good strategies to inform his audience on the life of narcotics officers and gang-infested neighborhoods. One strategy he used was showing the life of a crooked nark. This life shows how they abuse their authority, using it to their advantage, violating people’s rights, and breaking the law. In the movie, the veteran officer, Alonzo, is crooked. His actions show him stealing from drug dealers and killing ex-police officers.  Also, he harasses innocent teenagers, stealing from them as well. He gets away with it because he is a police officer, With this strategy, Ayer informs us on what’s out there in the real world.  Anyone who has been arrested or harassed by the police can relate to this. The strategy affects the audience in many ways. The audience can relate to this because they see it every day in the urban communities. They see police abusing the public arresting, harassing, and killing innocent people. This creates a sense of pathos with the audience getting emotional because they can relate to what they are seeing. They feel for people being treated so unfairly by crooked officers.    
Furthermore, Ayer uses the life of a rookie nark trying to move up in the police force. In the movie, Jake just wants to be a police officer, a police officer that protects, serves, and locks away all the criminals. Jake wants to bring justice to anyone who breaks the law. He signs up for narcotics hoping to put away the drug dealers. In the movie, he constantly says, “I just want to lock up the bad guys”. This gives the audience a chance to see what being a nark really is all about. The audience can relate to this in many ways. Everybody knows how it feels being new to something and wanting to do what is right, especially law enforcement officers. I bet many officers who see this movie knew exactly how it feels being rookies on the force, being trained, hoping one day they can be part of the narcotics team. Ayer utilizes a great deal of pathos arousing emotion in these police officers and people who can relate to Jake’s journey. He is just trying to do what he loves to do.
Finally, the last strategy Ayer uses to inform his audience about the narcotics officer’s work and gang-infested communities is filming on the streets of Los Angeles. The streets of Los Angeles are very dangerous, particularly in the urban communities. On the streets drugs, poverty, violence, and most importantly gangs, exist. When shooting this film, this was the first time gangs even allowed cameras to be brought into their environment, which established ethos, giving the movie major credibility about the gangs and their way of living. The audience is connected to this because every state in United States of America has an urban community. During the movie, there were shootouts and drug scenes. Also there were drug users and rapists. Shootouts and drug transactions/altercations occur often in the urban communities of California. Some of gang members were not actors but actual members of Los Angeles street gangs. By incorporating actual gang members, Ayer gives a perfect description to his audience of gang life and the streets of Los Angeles.
David Ayer’s plan when writing this film was not just to tell an ordinary story of a narcotics officer but to show the audience the harsh reality of gangs and inner city violence which involve law enforcement, guilty and innocent people. The Los Angeles street setting was the perfect environment for the film. Ayer did a excellent job on informing his audience about the journeys of street cops and gang-infested neighborhoods by using two narcotics police officers, and the streets of Los Angeles. The streets of Los Angeles are a dangerous place and can even corrupt police officers. Jake found that out when he stepped into his trainer Alonzo’s office a Monte Carlo. Training Day demonstrates that just because individuals wear badges, they are not law abiding.

Culture and Technology notes

Technology- Tools to connect makes life easier
How is technology discussed

Culture groups qualities and beliefs morals ethnic beliefs ideas characteristics qualities
Cultural studies from 1960 and 70's richard hoggart stuart hall raymond williams e.p thompson dick hebbige

how my culture influence technology how technology has influenced my culture
author audience relationship


Day 2
A study of balances and morals difne aspect of culture and connect to technology
Three steps when using a quote
intoduce quote who is the author if citing famous author give them ethos were does this quote come from
accurately site the quote
refelct tell why the information is important to my argument

how why and effect 
figure out whats important and how it is communicated
Cultural outline
intro
background exigence

Day 3 research
two-three sources new sources
Blogs perosnal testimony ancedotes exigence
Why we are making an argument
difine and figure out how technology interacts
STructure
Define culture
introduce the specfic issue view points counter postions invole
introduce and define the technology
how technology is working else were in our defined culture
1.What is the issue "so what? who cares?"
2.Who are you as an author? ethos
3.Who is my audience? inside outside informed UN informed
4.Do research.

Day 4 The Art of quoting
informative persuasive evaluate proposal
Think about who are u speaking to out side changing are group how it can change there group
theses how technology effects culture 3 effects or key points
STRUCTURE
introduction (culture and technology)
Background summary exgience
Talk about things that come togother(body)
is this good are bad how it (effects culture)
conclusion summarize give other people

old hip hop back in the day records atracks tapes tv  new hip hop cds ipods tv
old technology new technology mixing boards computers
rqapping culture promoting consume recording pratices has change stay independent  new recording pratices auto tune

Does Technology change culture, or does culture change technology?

I believe that technology and culture both even out when being compared to each other. I don't think that culture changes technology or technology changes culture. I think that technology changes society. when i hear technology i think about how it has change the way we as people communicate. technology has made a whole new way of doing things. this includes doing things faster and accurate. When i hear the world culture i think about different religion and ethnic groups. Peoples morals and beliefs, the roots from which they came from.

Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Rhetorical Analysis Draft

Do you want to go to jail or do you want to go home can you imagine being asked this question. It’s pretty obvious of what the answer should be, I want to go home.  Well this is just one of the memorable quotes from the academy award winning movie training day, written by David Ayer and directed by Antoine Fuqua. Training day is about a veteran police officer (Alonzo) who’s training a rookie police officer (Jake). The veteran officer takes the rookie officer on a twenty four hour period throughout the harsh streets of Los Angeles.  He try’s showing him tactics and strategies to become a good narcotics officer.  The Director Fuqua tries to show the most authentic environment as possible by shooting the film in the exact neighborhoods of the Los Angeles streets gangs. Fuqua informs his audience on the journeys of street cops and gang infested neighborhoods by using two narcotics police officers and the streets of Los Angeles.
Training day is about a veteran narcotics street cop (Alonzo) who takes a rookie cop (Jake) on a twenty four hour training period through out the streets of Los Angeles California. During the twenty four hour period Alonzo tries to teach Jake his knowledge and strategies of being a narcotics cop. This is so that Jake can eventually become a official narcotics cop and join the narcotics team. Jake is all in willing to learn but realizes Alonzo’s tactics and strategies are different from what he thought. Jake wants to protect and serve. All about locking up the criminals but Alonzo is all about everything but that being a crooked cop. Alonzo puts Jake in numerous situations were he has to think under pressure. He convinces Jake to do drugs while on the job. Also he takes Jake on a job with three other cops. They seizes a couple of million dollars from a know drug dealers property but when Alonzo offers Jake to take a cut of the money Jake is confused and says no. After realizing how Alonzo’s narcotics team is being ran Jake wants out this is not what I signed up for as he states in David Ayer Training Day but by this time it is to late Alonzo has left him in a Los Angeles gang members house were they are told to kill him. Jake eventually away after he convinces the Los Angeles gang members let him go for saving there little cousin early in the movie.  Jake still wants to do the right thing so he goes and finds Alonzo and takes back the money they stole early in a police raid that Alonzo is going to use to pay off the Russian mob. If Alonzo doesn’t pay off the debt he will be killed. Jake still takes the money any way and turns it in to the police as evidence. Alonzo gets killed later that night Jake has no sympathy for Alonzo. He feels the Los Angeles Police Department and the streets of Los Angeles will be a better place with out him.
David Ayer used many good strategies to inform his audience on the life of narcotics cops and gang infested neighborhoods. One strategy he used was showing the life of a crooked cop. This life shows how they abuse their authority, using it to their advantage, violating people’s rights, and breaking the law. In the movie the veteran officer Alonzo is crooked. His actions show him stealing from drug dealers and killing ex police officers.  Also he harasses innocence teenagers stealing from them as well. He gets away with it because he’s cop.  With this strategy Ayer informs us on what’s out there in the real world.  Anyone who has been arrested or harassed by the police can relate to this. The strategy affects the audience in many ways. The audience can relate to this because they see it every day in the urban communities. They see drug dealers and cops getting over folks always arresting, harassing, and killing innocence people. This creates a since of pathos with the audience getting emotional because they can relate to what there seeing. They feel for there people being treated so unfairly by crooked officers.    
The next strategy Ayer uses is showing the life of a rookie cop trying to move up in the police force. In the movie Jake just wants to be and police officer. A police officer that protects, and serves, and locks away all the criminals, Jake wants to bring justice to anyone who breaks the law. He signs up for narcotics hoping to put away the drug dealers. In the movie he constantly says I just want to lock up the bad guys. This gives the audience a chance to see what being a cop really is all about. The audience can relate to this in many ways. Everybody knows how it feels being new to something and wanting to do the right thing. This strategy can be intended to all police officers in the world. I bet every office who seen this movie new exactly how it felt being a rookie on the force. Being trained hoping one day they can be detective. Ayer brings in a lot of pathos gaining emotion from these cops and people who can relate to Jakes journey. He’s just trying to do what he loves to do.
Last but not least the final strategy Ayer uses to inform his audience on the narcotics officer work and gang infested communities is filming in the streets in the Los Angeles. The streets of Los Angeles as we all know are very dangerous, particularly in the urban communities. They deal with drugs, poverty, violence and most importantly gangs. As I stated early in the text when shooting this film Ayer wanted to create the most authentic environment as possible. So he filmed all over Los Angeles and in particularly he filmed in the urban communities were the gangs originated from. This was the first time gangs even aloud cameras to be brought in there environment. This created a strong path of ethos. Giving the movie major credibility on the gangs and there way of living. The audience is connected to this because every state in United States of America has an urban community. During the movie there were shoot outs and drug scenes. Also there were drug users and rapist in the movie. All these things are exactly what are going on in the urban communities of Los Angeles. Some of the gang’s members were not actors but actual members of Los Angeles streets gangs. Ayer is showing all this to his audience. He gives a perfect description to his audience of gang life and the streets of Los Angeles.
David Ayers plan when writing this film was not just to tell an ordinary story of a narcotics cop but to tell show the whole world the harsh realities of gangs and intercity violence those that involve law enforcement and innocence people the Los Angeles setting was the perfect environment for the film it gave a on point view of the realities of streets. Ayer did a perfect job on informing his audience on the journeys of street cops and gang infested neighborhoods by using two narcotics police officers and the streets of Los Angeles. The streets of Los Angeles are a dangerous place and can get to the best of us even police officers. Jake found that out when he step in to his trainers office a Monte Carlo. This film proves just because you’re wearing a badge doesn’t always mean you’re the good guy.